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Rey is swimming in his pool. His neighbor Matt comes. Matt: Hey Rey, do you have an electric drill?

'In the garage', Rey says. Matt: Will bring it back tomorrow. 'OK', Rey says.

10 minutes later. Matt: I still don't see it, Rey, are you sure you put it in the garage?

Rey says, 'Maybe it is still at Gin's place, he got it last week.'

Matt: Who is Gin? Can I get it from him?

Rey says, 'My colleague. Let me write down to you how to get to his place.'

Matt: Thanks Rey. Enjoy your swimming.



3 blog comments below

yous should break the paragraphs properly like this:

Rey is swimming in his pool. His neighbor Matt comes.

(you are using first person reference so it should be in its own paragraph)
Matt: Hey Rey, do you have an electric drill?

'In the garage', Rey says.

(you are using first person reference so it should be in its own paragraph)
Matt: Will bring it back tomorrow. 'OK', Rey says.

10 minutes later.

(you are using first person reference so it should be in its own paragraph)
Matt: I still don't see it, Rey, are you sure you put it in the garage?

Rey says, 'Maybe it is still at Gin's place, he got it last week.'

Matt: Who is Gin? Can I get it from him?

Rey says, 'My colleague. Let me write down to you how to get to his place.'

Matt: Thanks Rey. Enjoy your swimming.
badai on Mon Oct 15, 2012 7:38 am
Thanks!

I will type the reference in its own paragraph next time.

Smile
lovescience on Fri Oct 19, 2012 8:16 am
Good to know
TheLimey on Sun Oct 21, 2012 7:43 pm



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