After all these years we spend together
been one,trust and lay on each other
always give forward to our feature
there was nothing I really scare
I had you and that was all that I care
but now you re gone,things change
my happiness end,tears challenge
completely destroyed,look at mt image
be with out you get me damage
my life after you become forbidding
I'm throughly badly suffering
be with out you is the hardest thing
It feels empty and nothing
perhaps you should know at last
even you re out of my sight
you will never be out of my heart
my love over you has no ending
you will live in me forever darling!
Rhyme somewhere is wrong.
And everything seems to be ok.
I really apperciate the comment you gave on my poem "be with out you"
I will be more carefull with the rythm next time