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be with out you!!!!






love poem!!!
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selammussie
After all these years we spend together

been one,trust and lay on each other

always give forward to our feature

there was nothing I really scare

I had you and that was all that I care

but now you re gone,things change

my happiness end,tears challenge

completely destroyed,look at mt image

be with out you get me damage

my life after you become forbidding

I'm throughly badly suffering

be with out you is the hardest thing

It feels empty and nothing

perhaps you should know at last

even you re out of my sight

you will never be out of my heart

my love over you has no ending

you will live in me forever darling!
Arseniy
Rhyme somewhere is wrong.
And everything seems to be ok.
selammussie
I really apperciate the comment you gave on my poem "be with out you"

I will be more carefull with the rythm next time

thanxs again

love
selam mussie!!!
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