englisch research report

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hey all

im last year of mine school and now im on interim at a company and i have done a ICT project

now must i make a research report in the English. as you all can see, English isn't mine best language.

so i was wondering if some peopl here, who now good englisch, can help me to improve mine research report. i can understand that nobody really understands what it's about but it goes over the qualitie of the English.

as there are 21 pages, i can also understand that not everybody want to look at all the pages, im already happy when somebody looks at 1 chapter and another at the next one.

plz send/upload a word document back, with the changes in a different color. this way i can see what there is changed and also learn from it

i've uploaded the report on mine server.
http://traxion.frih.net/test_result.doc

already everybody thnk for helping
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Bikerman

OK - I've proof read the first two pages and made corrections.
http://bikerman.info/test_result.doc

PS - I normally charge £25 per hour for proof reading but you can have this as a freebie Smile

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Bikerman

You are welcome. Frih$ are not actually much use to me (I've got thousands). Time is much more valuable Smile

OK - I'll try to do some more pages over the next couple of days when/if I get time. I'm not going to promise anything and if you can get others to do the work then do so, but I may have time to do some more between other jobs.

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Bikerman

Here are the next 3 pages:
http://bikerman.info/test_result2.doc

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changed the changes

does anybody else want's to help me?

i've updated the file on the server
http://traxion.frih.net/test_result.doc

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anybody else?

on Thursday im going to deliver it on school

i hope that some people more want to help me