Feedback needed on tutorial

Jaan

http://www.metacafe.com/watch/965299/street_magic_the_ring_shrick_method/
How do you think the editing is on that?

Is everything easy to understand/follow?

What could I improve on?

Thanks so much, it's a big help.

Jaan

No one has any comments? It's a free magic trick Wink

and not very hard.

Please! I need to improve my editing skills. (as you can see).

emem

It's a good tutorial, well explained and understandable. Just not my topic Wink

irishmark

not bad - could have made it look a little prettier.

Bluedoll

Easy to understand and follow super!

As a suggestion you could have a longer leader at the start or if you like an ending that shows something about you or why your doing it, or about your area of interest, a statement that would re-enforce your craft such as why doing this or how fun it is etc. or just your face in it for example to make it more personal or if you perfer an image of something like a hat, white dove, rabbit etc. .... for extra effects or general mood of the video.