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CPJ Productions: Mr. Not - The Invincible Man

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dwcnps
Hey frihosters,

This is a stop-motion animation I made. It's for a site that I'm making soon, replacing my old website as the primary part (my old site will be left for people who want to see it).

Click here to see my video.

I would like some feedback to help me with future productions so feel free to comment Smile .
videoguy
thats honestly one of the worst videos ive ever seen. more than half of it is just titles, which are WAY too long by the way, and there is no point to the video, and there is a frame of blue status screen from your camcorder.

and for your website, that stuff with background tiled images looks really bad, i would just drop it. it makes your page look like a messed up myspace layout.
dwcnps
videoguy wrote:
thats honestly one of the worst videos ive ever seen. more than half of it is just titles, which are WAY too long by the way, and there is no point to the video, and there is a frame of blue status screen from your camcorder.

and for your website, that stuff with background tiled images looks really bad, i would just drop it. it makes your page look like a messed up myspace layout.


That's my old web. Haven't published the real one yet (If you think the real one is bad, my partner in movie making did the basics of it).

And the video is the first of its kind. The blue screen, well, the camcorder (plugged into a capture card) turned itself off (the frame was captured in the process of it).

I'm sorry if you don't think it's good but this was more of a practice video. I'm new to stop-motion animation.

And if you think that was bad, there was another one I made, it was worse than this one.

I think I know what to do now, thankyou videoguy.

I personally think it is alright but if anyone else think it's bad, I'm happy for comments.

One thing videoguy. Name one thing you really think I should improve on.

Thankyou...
videoguy
make it have a story.....there was basically no point to it. the guy just has his weapons, then gets killed.....no story arc= no point
dwcnps
videoguy wrote:
make it have a story.....there was basically no point to it. the guy just has his weapons, then gets killed.....no story arc= no point


The main idea of it was meant to be a joke and did have a story with it:

A guy with his weapons brags that he is so good, he can't die, blah, blah, blah. Then he explained that only a giant dalek could kill him and seemingly very unluckily; along comes his nemesis, a giant dalek. "Exterminate" he's dead. To some people there is a moral: If you brag, bad things happen to you or if there is a saying to it, whatever. To other people; It's funny.

The main idea of the Mr. Not is there is a guy who says he's so good and in proving it (or accidentally) he gets hurt, or his worst enemy comes along and challenges him.

I'm starting my videos off as jokes or short stories with a joke as the main idea of them. Soon, me and the whole of CPJ will be filming an unofficial series of Doctor Who.

Future videos will be better than this one.

Thank you.
irishmark
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6a8uGOELk7k
here u go
dwcnps
irishmark wrote:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6a8uGOELk7k
here u go


So what's the moral of this story? Irishmark has super powers? Laughing
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