Its pretty good. I'm not sure if your wording for the on screen text is grammatically correct but thats just nitpicking. What program did you use to make this?
Very Impressive! My only suggestion would be to use a more professional looking font. Other then that - Genius!
NOt bad at all - some of the sketches where a little difficult to see - especially the architecture one. As its an animation pience you could get away with thickening up those lines for the video.
I found the music a little dull too. Maybe that's just down to taste but it felt a little sluggish with that track.
first, i dont like the texture on the pen....it looks messed up for some reason, i think a nice black pen might look better.
Also, the ad should come to a climax in the end, but right now, its just like 5 examples and then its done. Your footage and music should reflect increasing importance as the video develops.
as someone else said, use a different font.
also, maybe try to get a narrower depth of field, i think it would make your ad more dramatic, which i wager is something you want.
At the end you should put down some info about yourself, contact info, ect.
also, why is there a white eraser when you have a pen as a drawing instrument?
make the table less shiny, it makes the scene look too fake.
and for the car thing, start off with the paper in landscape mode, it looks weird stretching it out like that.
the transition from the outline for the building and the color version looked weird also, like only the middle half of the frame had the effect applied to it, you should either do the entire frame or just the page of paper
the white text is hard to read over the white page, so either change the color, put a bolder outline around the text, or put a dark semi-clear dark cloud behind the text to make it easier to read. or, just make the text separate from the footage, on the top or bottom over a black bar, or you could just have a black screen befor each shot with the text. Try to find a more OFFICIAL looking font, maybe one that uses all caps.
i liked the music tho, and your idea with tranformations is good, but it not really professional yet, if thats what your aiming for.
never underestimate the importance of EASY READABILITY for your viewer!
I love it! Favorite part is the sheet floating away.
i think that was creatuive man........... well first of all congratualtionson ur first advertisemnt........ but lot of road left to drive.....
but well begun is half done
and that was inspiring as well.......... if was in that schooll i would just go and buy the drawing materials....... keep it up dude
