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Aalia
So, does somebody wright anything?

Here is one of my songs -
Leaving you

The hardes word to me...goodbye

Time is passing me by
I see the truth
I see the lie
Time is running, goodbye
There's no reason ask me why

Oh-oh-oh
I won't pretand
I'm in love with you
I won't pretand
I always waned you
I won't pretand to
I whant to stay
but uh
This time it's ok
I'm leaving you today

Leaving you today
It's hard but I'm ok
Leaving you today
No chanse, no way to stay
Leaving you today
Nothing more to say
Leaving you today
Sorry sweet babey...


Then I will forgive you...
Then I will forget you...
Then I'll be ok...
Then, and maby just today


Oh-oh-oh
I won't pretand
I'm in love with you
I won't pretand
I always waned you
I won't pretand to
I whant to stay
but uh
This time it's ok
I'm leaving you today

Leaving you today
It's hard but I'm ok
Leaving you today
No chanse, no way to stay
Leaving you today
Nothing more to say
Leaving you today
Sorry sweet babey...


Damn it's so hard
I dont even see the light
But today we're ok...
And it's ower
Pleas don't play
Cause today...
Goodbye is ok...
Goodbye...it's ower
Goodbye...time's up
Goodbye...we are apart
Goodbye...I close the door
Goodbye...no more...no more...
petgraveyard
Not bad...not bad at all! What kind of music would you put that to? I evaluated some of the verses, and (wheather you wanted to or not) I think you followed the iambic tetrameter rhythm!

All music rocks, and this is no exception.
Aalia
Well I already have fans=)
This is the demo vers, it's bad for demo, but we just did it for our friends.

http://members.lycos.co.uk/forumlena/leving_u.mp3
Aimewitue
i think it's not bad =)
Boles Roor
I like the song, and the text, but I think you need to work on pronouncing when you're singing.

I know I'm no expert, but it sounds like you're singing through your nose(a friend of mine takes singing lessons so I hear stuff now and then).

I don't want to sound like a bitch, sorry if I do. I just want to try and help.

Btw, I listened to your other songs, and I like those too. Your texts are really good. Alot better then the crap that's on the radio.
Aalia
Thanx to all of you guys.

Boles Roor
Thanx. No you don't sound like bitch=) Thanx for telling it, at real it sounds this way, couse I was a little bit ill, we were drunk and we recordesd it with the comtuper and not in the studio=)
But thanx a lot for telling me you thought and for saying this about my texts it's realy important to me like for a wrighter=)
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