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iflash
Hi, I am back, this website was on spanish only.

www.oruroonline.com

Please help me, if you find english errors, send it.
The-Master
Your site looks really nice but I don't actually understand the English version, no offence.


Quote:
Oruro Online gives you the most cordial welcome to the portal dedicated to show the impressive and peculiar aspects of the highest, folklorical and touristic cities of the world.



If you share this purpose, we invite you to contact us.

  1. It sounds very formal. I don't know if that is how you want it to sound but it might be better in simpler english. e.g. ...welcomes you to the ...
  2. I don't know what you mean by folklorical
  3. Apart from those it seems very good!
iflash
The-Master wrote:
Your site looks really nice but I don't actually understand the English version, no offence.


Quote:
Oruro Online gives you the most cordial welcome to the portal dedicated to show the impressive and peculiar aspects of the highest, folklorical and touristic cities of the world.



If you share this purpose, we invite you to contact us.

  1. It sounds very formal. I don't know if that is how you want it to sound but it might be better in simpler english. e.g. ...welcomes you to the ...
  2. I don't know what you mean by folklorical
  3. Apart from those it seems very good!


thanks.
Very Happy

folklorical means something that my people do, like dancing, but only music of my country. About the formality, my language is Spanish and I am learning English Smile
ocalhoun
The-Master wrote:
I don't know what you mean by folklorical
Pertaining to folk lore, I'd suppose. (Should be simply folkloric.)


Quote:
highest, folklorical and touristic cities of the world.

I'd reword this something like this:
best folkloric and tourism cities in the world.
Reasons:
1: folklorical is spelled wrongly
2: having a comma in that place makes no sense at all
3: 'highest touristic' doesn't make a whole lot of sense either
Technaut
most of this site doesn't make sense to me. i am clueless as to what some of the sentences mean. part of the problem might be that this site is in English, and i speak American. Very Happy
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