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black - a poem (by me)






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tidruG
It's the colour of darkness
While you wait for the light to consume you
It's the colour of the wait
While you search for the answers inside you
It's the colour of death
While you live your life in technicolor
It's the colour of freedom
When we're chained by glorious sight
It's the colour of co-existence
When we're consumed by belief
It's the colour of the rebel
The child that lives inside us
It's the colour of the flight
Of the phoenix that weeps inside us.

.......... b l a c k ..........

07/06/05
tidruG
GOODNESS!!!! Does no one on this site appreciate poetry? Only 16 views and no replies, no votes!!! GOOD GOD!
Oblivious
that was really good i enjoyed reading that, you deffinatley have some great skill with poetry. 5/5
tidruG
wow thanks... at least ONE person read the poem...
But seriously, I think 5/5 is a little too generous..lol.
[wAh]Killer
wow man

really nice

i readed it fully Smile and it ownz

keep it up man Wink

good job
tidruG
wow. another 5/5... thanks! But i still think that 5/5 is a little generous... but maybe that's just me not being satisfied with anything...lol
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