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black - a poem (by me)
It's the colour of darkness
While you wait for the light to consume you
It's the colour of the wait
While you search for the answers inside you
It's the colour of death
While you live your life in technicolor
It's the colour of freedom
When we're chained by glorious sight
It's the colour of co-existence
When we're consumed by belief
It's the colour of the rebel
The child that lives inside us
It's the colour of the flight
Of the phoenix that weeps inside us.
.......... b l a c k ..........
07/06/05
While you wait for the light to consume you
It's the colour of the wait
While you search for the answers inside you
It's the colour of death
While you live your life in technicolor
It's the colour of freedom
When we're chained by glorious sight
It's the colour of co-existence
When we're consumed by belief
It's the colour of the rebel
The child that lives inside us
It's the colour of the flight
Of the phoenix that weeps inside us.
.......... b l a c k ..........
07/06/05
GOODNESS!!!! Does no one on this site appreciate poetry? Only 16 views and no replies, no votes!!! GOOD GOD!
that was really good i enjoyed reading that, you deffinatley have some great skill with poetry. 5/5
wow thanks... at least ONE person read the poem...
But seriously, I think 5/5 is a little too generous..lol.
But seriously, I think 5/5 is a little too generous..lol.
wow man
really nice
i readed it fully
and it ownz
keep it up man
good job
really nice
i readed it fully
and it ownz
keep it up man
good job
wow. another 5/5... thanks! But i still think that 5/5 is a little generous... but maybe that's just me not being satisfied with anything...lol
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