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Wings of a Butterfly





rawb24
Fly on The Wings Of A Butterfly
Feel Free Like you'll never die
Lets all your troubles fade away
Just Have Fun and play all day
Fly on the wings of a Butterfly
Life is Short So don't be shy



-Rawb
Aimewitue
nice one =)
albusa
涼しい raw, i like your poem
tidruG
Short and sweet.
What I liked best about your poem is its basic simplicity, and the simple swinging rhyming feel to it... it has that "jingle" feel to it, yet, it's higher enough to be a poem.
Hunterseaker
tidruG wrote:
Short and sweet.
What I liked best about your poem is its basic simplicity, and the simple swinging rhyming feel to it... it has that "jingle" feel to it, yet, it's higher enough to be a poem.

I totaly agree with you, the simplicaty is the best of the whole poem.
Ant the text is very good to, nice reflection of the society.....(way to busy and not relaxed)
tefa_taftaf2010
rawb24 wrote:

Fly on the wings of a Butterfly


Nice words ... and really i like your simile

Oh a Butterfly Smile
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