proofread my paper, get frih$

jds10912 · Last edited by jds10912 on Sat Oct 07, 2006 5:34 am; edited 1 time in total

please proofread my paper, for every mistake, either grammatical or factual, i will award 7 frih$

edit: closed

wumingsden

Updated version: http://www.xtrauploader.com/330872

I don't know whether my changes are really that helpful but the new file is above. The differences may be because we're probably in two different countries. I don't want any Frih$ for it. I advise you to look at the changes and keep this thread open for another member to proof-read the file.

P.S - I have sent the URL (to delete the file) via PM.