Hi im very new aswell.
I liked your peotry buti think we need to be atleast just as good to leiving beeings on our beautifull earth:) Thats my 5 cents...Peace
Welcome to FriHost Forums, I am also a little new here.
Actually poetry is not dumb. Not even the smallest poem or the one that you cant firgure out what the point was.
As for your poem it was sweet.
And it means alot to those of us that can understand it and know what you are talking about.
I rather have to agree with you, on Earth being a beauty.
It seems that now adays theres so much things happening that you have to look in small places and hard its still hard to find some beauty here. But if you look hard enough you will eventually find some.
It may be in the sky or on the ground, or in between but you can always find it if you look far enough.
Earth, God has given us this planet to tend to and care for as if it was our own child.
No one seems to care.
We are only hanging on by a hair.
What will happen,
When the rappen comes at my door.
Will I open it to find Jesus at my side?
Or will it be the devil with which whom I can never smile no more?
Thanks for reading my small little poem.
Take care.
Remember BEAUTY is everywhere and it is in the eye of the beholder
You can find it, Just be postive and it will be there.
[b]City in the clouds or<br>City of the clouds??
[b]So how did the shopping cart get there, cuz there's no stores near by??