not bad... but try to use plain paper.. and the proportion of the leg is not good... but its pretty good though... keep drawing!
the graph paper is really distracting. You should try and use black paper to draw in general. If that can't be done (if it started as a doodle), clean it up and take out those lines in post production.
The anatomy isn't quite right, but you didn't pick an easy pose. Keep at it and you'll make strong progress.
came on girl, what is that, that is so grotest, so heavy, how can you imagine a poor man tortured by a big stick in the ass, I can catch your idea, and I see the crown like jesuscrist, girl you are playing with the man.
if you finish that in oils and you exposes that in a big art gallery you will win popularity, but maybe in that way will be your death
I always like your drawing technique, but the overall feeling is not good, due to the violence of the scene.