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critique my brochure?





bjwok
hi folks,

just wondering if any fri-ers out there would like to make comment on a brochure i have made as part of my grpahic design diploma?

you can scope it here:

http://www.bjwok.frih.net/

(then hit the 'brochure project' link)

cheers,
benjad
"feeling lazy" Make it larger (by my eye, it's current size is less than 1" when printed). Maybe also arch it up around the island.

Put LSD trips in large letters in the blue water. The reflection image is cool, but it just doesn't seem to fit.


Seeing as the bottom of most brochures is obscured by some kind of holder, might want to move the affiliates icons to somewhere more prominient.
bjwok
hi benjad,

thanks for your thoughts champ, unfortunately i haven't seen your suggestions until now (due to the world cup!) and the brochure is due today, so i will have to submit what i have got. however your comments are duely noted for future reference...

cheers (and how about the aussie v croatia game?!!)
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