Its only a start ( my rough draft ) but here it gose
Fourms that are fun and exciting
Right hosting for me
Hosting made easy.
Outrageously CHEEP ( FREE ! )
The BEST free hosting!
Yes I am desprate for points do you like it though ?
niceeeee idea ... remind me with other words we are made
before and now like life and love ...
but Frihost word is of course specially
"Cheep" is actually spelt Cheap, unless you mean "Cheep" as in a bird "Cheep"
Nice thinking! Good imagination!
Keep up the good work!
It's okay, but not great. In addition, it is not a poem, but an acrostic. Of course, the spelling could use a lot of work, but that's not necessarily critical. More important is that the word "the" generally is not used as one of the key words of an acrostic. Perhaps "Totally free hosting!" would be a little better, at least for starters. Keep trying, though - it's a good first effort!
Yes, but you could replace it with Terrific (Frihost all the way!)