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Death Was Just a Pretext





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Hey im new here, so i dont think anyone knows me, or my writing style. well before i post some of my writing, Im India, and i write alot. lol pretty interestin right? i have a pretty "dark and twisted" style of writing as some say, but i prefer to call it "in depth." its just how i am, i really am wary of posting my stuff on the internet, because i dont give humanity the benifit of the doubt-i wouldnt put it past someone to take something of my own and pass it off as theirs, now im not saying that my writing is spectacular, even though its not, it is mine, and i feel protective of it, just like a child Very Happy my words are indeed my babies lol if anyone understands.
so im pretty nervous about posting some things, but i will, as long as no one takes anything without asking me and giving me some credit here Wink and also considering im worried about plagrism and whatnot, im not posting any of my best lol but heres somewhat of what i do, and i welcome comments/critisism, in fact, i encourage it! so please do Smile im open to suggestions and i really would like some!
thank you Smile

Death Was Just a Pretext

and it was under the careful death of silence that she wept
painful to her task of setting
the blood upon the floor
Delicate designs it traced upon the ceiling
The reflection of deceased passion
As she drank to the health
Of all that was known before
Flaws upon the beauty
Disappoints the fact
False madness
Cuts through the thin remainder of
Intricate magnificence
That has failed upon this night
When you’ve taken your own death
A darkness of latter spite
The sound of gentle eyes closing
Cuts off the light
Introducing to blind less eyes
A hell yet to come
And an eternity to turn in reverence
At the blood that once was
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