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Space Junkiez





esenbi
The main reason why i need a Frihost Account.
is because i have a new Comic Strip, so, I think, YOU will be the first ones, to see the first episode before my website will be up!!
i realy need your opinion, so be nice. Very Happy

there it is:





so.. what do you think? Razz
Klaw 2
sorry but its a bit, hmm weird an not funny.
IceCameron
Your drawing style and humor needs ALOT of work
jazrt
To present this as a first episode with the absolute stupidity of violence. Is not the way to go. if it was an episode later on then it might have some basis to work upon.
For one thing you don't develop a relationship with the character in the first Place, something that ties you to him.
and you just blow him away.
Helios
Erm.. that was pretty bad imo.

You need to work on your drawings.
Also, you should read other comics and you'll get inspired by them, because I don't find even 1 thing that's funny in your comic.

Sorry m8.
kaikou
Yeah, I'm sorry, but that was...senseless. Not funny at all.

If you want to improve your artistic style you can find all sorts of resources on the internet. The humor...I don't know how to help you there, pal... Sorry.
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