My Poetry

SFMeatwad

You might make fun of me, but I do not care, cause poetry is music, too. Yes, you heard me right, rap, rock, anything that ryhmes, is music.

www.freewebs.com/josephsuttonspoetry

I will soon update my works of art.

mimsxmassacre

i freaking loved your poetry

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KatanaSky

I read the first one ..I really liked the message you were portraying.. or at least the beginning part of the your poem.

Near the end it kind of seemed more like a rant but it's cool because you were probably just wanting to get your thoughts down.

It was alright, my only suggestion... try a different approach when it comes to rhyming for they seem a bit forced.

Here's a website that may help: http://www.pjlyons.com/Writing%20in%20Verse.htm