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I Like THis Poem





XxPrinceValoxX
Quote:
Underneath,
Underneath the warmth and smiles,
I am there

There is where I am frail and angry-
Trying so hard to understand,
And failing miserably

There is where I am rude and ugly,
Where I am tired and confused,
And no one seems to understand
My insanity

And down there is where I am a liar,
Where I am hurt and depressed,
And my self-loathing
Is impenetrable

And down there is where I question,
All that is me and surrounds me,
All of the masks that people wear,
So much like my own...

For, down there,
Where I am moody and sad,
I am possibly,
Absolutely,
Incredibly,

Alone.



This poem is by Claire K. Its a nice poem expresses a lot of feelings
DoS RUDY
Dear Poet,

You are so honest in this masked world. I love the way you undress yourself and everybody listenign to you or to the voice of your poem. It is very straightforaward piece which exercises all the faculties of emotions. It touched me personally as I am questioning my existenc in a remote part of Indonesia. I wonder, "What Am I doing Here?" Sometimes, we wear the mask or multiple of masks because we have no idea why we are here or there. Et least, that is the lesson from my experiences. We feel so wrath sometimes that answers are so far away from reality and the sinister in us start voicing the criticism. I love your poem because it says all we need to get naked while keeping the mask! Congratulation!
amazing
Not bad if you like Underneath Down There. Where is exactly Underneath Down There? Very Happy
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