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shome
hey Guys


i really neeeed ur help Smile
on my english(writing) class my teacher gave me homework which is ( write a paragraph describe in it ur dream house )
and i'm not vrey well in writing
can u plz gimme a hand Smile
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by the way : My native language is not English
Bikerman
This is the wrong place for this posting. However, since I am a teacher I cannot simply delete it (the 'teachers oath' Smile )
Think about what you want in a house. Should it be large? How many bedrooms? Gardens?
Should it be a normal house or would you like a special house (maybe a converted barn, or even an eco-house built underground) ? Where would the house be? Town, city or country? In what country?

That should be enough - simply answer the questions and then put it together in sentences.
If you post your effort back here I will mark it and give you any corrections - but you MUST tell your teacher that someone has helped you. They will not mind if you tell them that it was another teacher and that they helped 'carefully' and insisted that you told them.
OK?
shome
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This is the wrong place for this posting.


sorry i didn't know that Embarassed

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since I am a teacher I cannot simply delete it (the 'teachers oath' )



thanx i really appreciated Smile

ok . i'll try

" i would like to have in my dream house 3 bedrooms ,2 guset rooms , 2 livingroom and open kitchen
i want it (California) . i want in it Swimming pool , Plasma , large backyard "

but how i but them into paragraph !
*( she want us to give her deep descriptions Sad )



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They will not mind if you tell them that it was another teacher and that they helped 'carefully' and insisted that you told them

ofcurse i'll tell her
Bikerman
Well first let's get the words correct.
3 bedrooms
2 guest rooms
2 living rooms


Now let's look at making some sentences.
Start with the question - describe your dream house.
OK, so we will start:
My dream house......
Now, next we pick one topic. It could be the location. That would give us:
My dream house would be located in California.
That's one sentence done.
Next sentence - now we'll combine two ideas into one sentence.
The house would have a very large back garden with a swimming pool.
Notice I have substituted 'garden' for 'yard' because it sounds better Smile

Next sentence - we will now say what the house will be like indoors.
Inside the house there would be 3 bedrooms and 2 guest rooms.
Now, here is a problem. If we want to be more correct with our English, it is better to write words, not numbers (although many people don't agree) so we re-write that as
Inside the house there would be three bedrooms and two guest rooms.
Now let's make another sentence with 2 ideas in it.
There would also be two living rooms, and one of them would contain a large plasma TV.
I've put in 'large', but otherwise those are your words.
Now, how many sentences is that? 4...
So let's put it into a paragraph. Just put all the sentences one after the other.

My dream house would be located in California. The house would have a very large back garden with a swimming pool. Inside the house there would be three bedrooms and two guest rooms. There would also be two living rooms, and one of them would contain a large plasma TV.

That would be OK for a short paragraph. Do you think she wants more?
shome
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Well first let's get the words correct.
3 bedrooms
2 guest rooms
2 living rooms

thanx aloooot Smile

My dream house would be located in California. The house would have a very large back garden with a swimming pool. Inside the house there would be three bedrooms and two guest rooms. There would also be two living rooms, and one of them would contain a large plasma TV.

i like it it's soo nice and short Smile
but i think she wants more descriptions Sad
Bikerman
Well, it's up to you now.
Make sentences in the same way, but now use some different ideas.
Who will live in the house?
Will it have a garage?
Will it have a pool table or other sports equipment?
What type of power will it use (electricity, gas, solar, oil, wind powered) ?

Just answer those (or other question) in exactly the same way as I did above.

Chris.
shome
thanx alooot

i'll add this to my paragraph Wink
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