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ohh, sorry >_<, you can see it here http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/21888923
LOLZ looks like you are from japan...?
a bit crazy looking but still pretty cool ^^;
I would say: Wel Done ..for your first time !!!!
It's okay for a first piece in photoshop, did you make a new layer to colour on? It's best to make a multiply layer ontop of your original image for colouring. Also different brushes give you different textures. you might want to try and use texture brushes for the fabric next time you colour. Keep up the good work.
you allrady publish it in anther thired but what ever.....
It's pretty neat. You have the basic proportions of cartooning down.
Just a couple of tips for the future:
Make sure to draw on unlined paper, so we can see all the details of the drawing. I'm sure that graph paper was all you had at the time, but, in the future, you might want to just keep a bit of printer paper with you, to doodle on ^^
After you've layed down the base colors (like you have done), go into the color selector and choose a slightly darker shade to apply some shading. It'll bring out a lot of depth in your pics, and instantly make them stand out~
Keep it up and post again soon!
LOL oh how cute, its funny, not bad for a first one, i remember my first PS color rendering, i let people in Deviantart stab me for what its worth, well, i learned a lot from. and other people had given you an enough crit i guess, and some advises from me;
ontinue on practicing... of course perhaps u already know that, your colors.. explore more, find out w/c coloring style are u comfortable with, but on what I'm seeing in you, i think you're ok with flats, or a soft brush tones. Think of where the lights are, so u know where you should put the lighter shades. if you need help in the technical stuffs in PS dont be afraid to ask
I like your DeviantArt avatar. It's absolutely insane. :]
Really Nice Work!!
who drawed this!
very nice for first time....good job........just lil MIX with boy and girl