Very interesting concept you have there.
Looks very good so far.
If I were you, I would actually get someone who knows photoshop really well. Have them just make it look more digital for like on a computer, like a real animation, and then I would try to sell it to the company who does that phone service thing. It might be a good idea to make some extra cash.
You can PM me if your interested in doing that, I can do the design work for you, for half the profit it makes (if it makes any).
Funny concept, but very fitting for the times. I like your idea, definitely an original. I like the sketch and art as well. Nicely done.
I also really like the concept as well as the execution. I like the way the heads transition from reality to the phone screen, really great idea.
I like your idea and your drawing...I think you're on to something here. There's probably a huge untapped market for cards that actually relate to teenagers...and lets face it they're the ones with all the bucks! I hope you come up with a whole line of this stuff and keep posting! It's very refreshing to see someone come up with an original idea.