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It's going to explode...!!!
Here is my new model, it's a timebomb. Please comment on it and tell me what could I improve.
http://www.turbosquid.com/FullPreview/Index.cfm/ID/433672
Thanks everyone!
http://www.turbosquid.com/FullPreview/Index.cfm/ID/433672
Thanks everyone!
I'm not a bomb-expert, but I think it's quite realistic.
Nice piece of work
Nice piece of work
very cool!!! looks real!!
has anyone bought your work??
has anyone bought your work??
| Jaan wrote: |
| very cool!!! looks real!!
has anyone bought your work?? |
This bomb has been on sale for only 1 day, so no one has yet bought it but my wine glasses, papyrus scroll and car have been selling quite well.
As always, great modeling!!
The texturing needs more work though, but usually people buy just for the model, not the texture, so poly topology is more important here.
The texturing needs more work though, but usually people buy just for the model, not the texture, so poly topology is more important here.
| r4inm4ker wrote: |
| As always, great modeling!!
The texturing needs more work though, but usually people buy just for the model, not the texture, so poly topology is more important here. |
Yeah, ok. So, what should I improve in the texture? Do the TNT bar textures need improvement, or the Timer box or the wires...?
Thanks for the comments everyone!
| Whong wrote: |
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Yeah, ok. So, what should I improve in the texture? Do the TNT bar textures need improvement, or the Timer box or the wires...? Thanks for the comments everyone! |
It seems to me that the bar texture (especially the red one) is too "rough" and regular. the greenish yellow one is good though. The color of buttons in the timer box may have some variations too instead of all grey.It'll make the timer more interesting,lol.
| r4inm4ker wrote: | ||
It seems to me that the bar texture (especially the red one) is too "rough" and regular. the greenish yellow one is good though. The color of buttons in the timer box may have some variations too instead of all grey.It'll make the timer more interesting,lol. |
OK, will work on those things. Thanks for the comments!
OK, here are two pictures of those improvements. Is it any better...? 
http://www.turbosquid.com/FullPreview/Index.cfm/ID/433672
Check the 2 LAST images, they are the new ones.
Thanks!
http://www.turbosquid.com/FullPreview/Index.cfm/ID/433672
Check the 2 LAST images, they are the new ones.
Thanks!
wow! awesome dude!
like it =]
but..I think, the cables aren't realistic enough, in compared with the other details...
a little improve of theme can help...
but anyway I like your work, very nice and realistic =]
like it =]
but..I think, the cables aren't realistic enough, in compared with the other details...
a little improve of theme can help...
but anyway I like your work, very nice and realistic =]
yeah it's much better now. Maybe add more specular to the buttons ? Now they look too diffuse, like rubber.
OK, I've added 3 new pictures!
http://www.turbosquid.com/FullPreview/Index.cfm/ID/433672
The first one and the two last ones are new.
Please tell if they are any better.
Thanks for the comments!
http://www.turbosquid.com/FullPreview/Index.cfm/ID/433672
The first one and the two last ones are new.
Please tell if they are any better.
Thanks for the comments!
Why do you want to explode a bomb graphically? I would be interested to know whether the photos are selling, as why would people want to buy them? What are they going to use them for?
| deanhills wrote: |
| Why do you want to explode a bomb graphically? I would be interested to know whether the photos are selling, as why would people want to buy them? What are they going to use them for? |
Urrmm... I'm not selling photos of a bomb, this is a 3D model of a bomb that people can buy and use for games, films or anyother graphical work. Some of my work have been selling pretty well, yes.
| deanhills wrote: |
| Why do you want to explode a bomb graphically? I would be interested to know whether the photos are selling, as why would people want to buy them? What are they going to use them for? |
| Whong wrote: |
| OK, I've added 3 new pictures!
http://www.turbosquid.com/FullPreview/Index.cfm/ID/433672 The first one and the two last ones are new.
Please tell if they are any better. Thanks for the comments! |
sure, that's better now. good works!! hope your bomb sells well
.| r4inm4ker wrote: |
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sure, that's better now. good works!! hope your bomb sells well . |
Thanks! I've made two other slightly different versions which you can find here.
Version 1:
http://www.turbosquid.com/FullPreview/Index.cfm/ID/435491
Version 2:
http://www.turbosquid.com/FullPreview/Index.cfm/ID/435488
Please tell me what you think of these!
Thanks again!!!
Very good.Not bad. 
Thanks! Nice to hear you liked it!
looks good, but priced pretty high.... I would take the 20-40 minutes to model it before I spend $45
If i REALLY needed that model, fast... the most i would spend is $15
If i REALLY needed that model, fast... the most i would spend is $15
| soljarag wrote: |
| looks good, but priced pretty high.... I would take the 20-40 minutes to model it before I spend $45
If i REALLY needed that model, fast... the most i would spend is $15 |
I do admit that the price is quite high, but then again I get only about 50% of the price minus taxes, etc. So in reality I get something like 15 - 20 $ for a 45$ model which isn't exactly much...
Then again underpricing is an issue. If I'd sell it for 15$ very few would buy it...
WOW amasing!, what program do you use? (i myself use Autocad 2009, and im shocking at it, i fail at everything, i don't even bother saving the models) Your really good
| Parkour_Jarrod wrote: |
| WOW amasing!, what program do you use? (i myself use Autocad 2009, and im shocking at it, i fail at everything, i don't even bother saving the models) Your really good |
Thanks for the comments! I use Cinema 4D. It is very easy to learn. You can download a free demo version from the Maxon website.
Cinema 4D Website:
www.maxon.net
I think it's great. Is Cinema 4d free to download and use?
| rogue_skydragon wrote: |
| I think it's great. Is Cinema 4d free to download and use? |
You can download a demo version of Cinema 4D but the main core application costs about 700 - 900$ and if you want all the modules it'll be something like 3200$.
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